This is the corrected version
i really like it. actually i think i prefer it this way. i like what it does to my eyes and the added "depth" created by layering the words. is this the version that was photocopied for us or the one in the blog?
It's the one from the blog. But I'm fixing it. Because the alignment was a little off and it is missing the CHANCE sheet.
i love it as well. very much in the spirit of the poem and what it was meant to do.
It felt different from the one before you changed it. I was drawn to this one. Not the other, interestingly. Compelling. That's the word.
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